Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Monday, April 20, 2020
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Miriam
ReplyDeleteGood work on putting your first post up. Thank you for sharing your story you have worked hard on it. What did the castle look like?
Miss Smith-Palmer
The castle was light pink and sparkled like the morning sun. Miriam.
DeleteHi Miriam, I love your introduction. I can picture the little girl playing.
ReplyDeleteWell done getting your story up on the blog. There is a video on the Timetables page that may be helpful.
Mrs Roach
Hi Miriam
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story. I liked the part where her dress and shoes magically turned into a gown and high heels! That would be very helpful. I'm wondering what the castle looked like too.
Rachel