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Monday, April 20, 2020

My story

We are just figuring out the blog... here is one of my stories. Miriam.



4 comments:

  1. Hi Miriam
    Good work on putting your first post up. Thank you for sharing your story you have worked hard on it. What did the castle look like?
    Miss Smith-Palmer

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    1. The castle was light pink and sparkled like the morning sun. Miriam.

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  2. Hi Miriam, I love your introduction. I can picture the little girl playing.
    Well done getting your story up on the blog. There is a video on the Timetables page that may be helpful.
    Mrs Roach

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  3. Hi Miriam
    I really enjoyed reading your story. I liked the part where her dress and shoes magically turned into a gown and high heels! That would be very helpful. I'm wondering what the castle looked like too.
    Rachel

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